Jordanlee's Persuasive essay 10ck

Persuasive essay 

The tuckshop should be cheaper, because not every kid can afford to buy there own food when they're hungry, sometimes some families are poor and can't fork out any money for their kids to eat lunches during the day, even if parents work as hard as they can the could not afford to feed their kids.

when your parents were raising you most of the time they would be struggling to feed themselves along with feeding you,

so why not just make the tuckshop food cheaper so people don't starve during class and so they can focus on learning not eating, make learning more fun and enjoyable for them,

and that's why tuckshop food should really be cheaper

if the tuckshop had cheaper food at lunchtimes they would also sell out fast because some people could afford to buy more stuff because it’s cheaps,  

that also means that poor people could buy more food for themselves too and could actually eat a good lunch to keep them educated 

this would also mean the school would be making more money off the food and again, students will be fall and ready for learning just like the other students. 

and that's why if tuckshop food was cheaper people would buy more.